Open Poetry #40 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
from the old days in dreams the good ones that happen quickly and then are gone before you get any on you I remember her hair smell and the laugh side of her eyes I was always beside her or behind her pretending to be across the street walking and she was walking faster to get to where I was with a mouth full of kiss flavors and the time to share them before anyone else came along but it was just a dream and the sand tasted bitter after my hands would never be her lips ___________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love this... a truly beautiful write, D and one that can bring back memories~~ M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a real pleasure~ My spirit will rise |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and she was walking faster to get to where I was with a mouth full of kiss flavors" sharing kiss flavors lovely stranger darlin' |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm... very nice! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks babe ____________________ ms groves, thanks for the read __________________ ladyone, thank you lady friend _________________ ms r&B, thank you for the walk by |
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