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Translucent Flame
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Translucent Flame |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Translucent Flame Oh echo soft inside my soul Takes precedent, its bell to toll The giving into high accord Its lasting gift might best afford Perchance the dreams allowed to stay Bestow another means to say As if I may, or if I might A giving wish in loves respite Undo to dim, the flame courtiers As bright the fire through the years Beside you still in passions play Into deep promise let to lay And leave me then on silken grass Allow this time apart to pass Into your hands release my tears When missing you each moment seers The truth to burn eternally Although perhaps you may not see For you my love, surrendered here A flame forever burns so clear Copyright Kkh 7/2/07 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Nice, TD, very nice! May the flame indeed burn forever. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your words are more beautiful than ever, TD. Just so lovely. Patricia |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Your words are very beautiful!!!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
simply beautiful love the ending enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
what a grand title and lead line! I LOVE: "Oh echo soft inside my soul(!)" and the image of "flame courtiers" |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Lovely and lyrical - enjoyed. |
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