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Open Poetry #40

Loving My Work

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

0 posted 2007-07-02 07:00 PM

You are pure, and a virgin for now
but tonight
there is more, and I shall flirt with no sound.
You are nude
and the bareness is very attractive to my mind
It's almost magnetic
the way I'm drawn
like a moth when fire flies.
My eyes then mirror the image
of a flame that ignites.
You then return the same favor
reflecting the same light.

Are you afraid, or is it the wind shaking you
when my pen slowly begins to rise.
I don't want you tearing,
it feels like I loose a piece of you,
when you begin to cry.

I begin the smooth strokes,
using my fine penmanship.
Is it too much for you,
handwriting perhaps,
should I dip my fingers in ink?
I see you like it dirty
with different curves and angles,
I shall now do you in manuscript.
It seems, like I should take my time,
to prevent you from getting ripped.

You begin to trust me
because I am one in which you can confide.
I have white out to keep those little errors
from ruining an in-scripting good time.
But now that I have filled your front
it is time for your back side.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-07-02 10:46 PM

*smile*

These are some smooth strokes, indeed!

much enjoyed.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2007-07-02 10:52 PM

I love the theme.. very good

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

3 posted 2007-07-02 11:17 PM

Thanks SB and Dominique-Simone.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2007-07-03 12:41 PM

lol..can't help but giggle over this one...

interesting write! enjoyed reading..

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

5 posted 2007-07-03 01:11 PM

I'm glad you liked it dgvarner. It was fun writing it, so maybe that's why it's fun to read.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

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