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RogueandPoet
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0 posted 2007-07-02 01:32 AM


The Poet King

Such a captivating thicket -
   the poets all agree –
   disturbing tangled imagery -
   a daunting, haunting read.

Obtuse and unforgiving
   no one truly could confirm
   what the Poet was asserting
   so entwining were his terms.

A treatise on the toes of God?
   A tribute to a cat?
   Poets gnashed through every vine
   as if it were their last.

And the Poet suffered accolades
   from all those pruning fools
   who tried to cut through his accomplishment
   with their blunt unsharpened tools.

Brambles, roots and thorns in rhyme
   the Poet who’d be king
   couldn’t tell a soul the words he'd penned
   weren’t meant to mean a thing.


© Copyright 2007 John Eyler - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-07-02 09:31 AM


I enjoyed this tongue-in-cheek treatise (now there's an oxymoron for you! lol) on the 'perpetrators' and critics of poetry!

"Obtuse and unforgiving
   no one truly could confirm
   what the Poet was asserting
   so entwining were his terms.

A treatise on the toes of God?
   A tribute to a cat?"

~ Ofttimes, that be true! lol

I believe that this poem is about Columbus discovering America. ~ Sorry, I couldn't help myself! I have a perverse sense of humor.

Enjoyed the read, Dear Poet!


EA


RogueandPoet
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2 posted 2007-07-02 11:29 AM


Thank you Earth Angel, you exactly nailed my intent with this poem. I had spent a couple days lurking around a site called the Poetry Free for all. Very serious place. It struck me that the end result of suffering the harsh critiques this site encourages would be that one would become a writer of poems for poets. I think poems should be accessible.
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