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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2007-06-29 02:09 PM


Sweet nothings whispered into ourears
Words so beautiful, swept us off our feet
An immediate attachment, so unlike any other
We wonder why, and so we ask
And with that smirk, that twinkle in his eye
We hear him say
“Its according to my design”

But what design is he designing
His most wanted wish almost accomplished
We come togetherwith open arms…
Offering a place for him inside…
Will he take it and forget the rest
and embrace our gift or will he dismiss it
Can he contain the beast within

“according to my design”
What does that really mean?
What design is that? Can you fill us in?
Or are we left to guess… blindly walking your path
Can you tell us this… will you be true to us?
Will you make us your angels?
Your main thought… your main idea
Will you keep us safe from harm
Or should we be scared of the true design…
Can we trust forever .. Or is it just a dream……


Jen--->MindBodySoul

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (06-29-2007 06:59 PM).]

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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
1 posted 2007-06-29 02:16 PM


I think that which makes us walk blind paths is called "Faith"
you either have it or you don't
no inbetween
adagio

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-29 02:27 PM


doubt makes us slow but make us more assured about our life.

beautiful.

enjoyed

have a nice day, dear lady!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2007-06-29 08:31 PM


touching write here

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