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Like Shimmer On Pearls
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Like Shimmer On Pearls |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Sometimes, on my side of some no where, this feeling plays there at the edge of my mind softly, like a warm embrace undeniably, I languish immersed in thought lingering like shimmer on pearls I become lost in a stolen moment where at times I swear, it is you that I'm feeling there.
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
exquisite Donna!!  RDB adding this one to my library .. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gentle One, you truly are gifted! ~ With talent and a divinely sweet spirit.  Love to you!  Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"at the edge of my mind softly, like a warm embrace undeniably, I languish immersed in thought" Love this verse. JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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PoloniusFicklebottom Junior Member
since 2007-06-27
Posts 17 |
i love how the poem seems to revolve around the word "shimmer". i don't hear that word often and it was quit refreshing. -Ficklebottom! "Every day is yours to create!" |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
So pretty your poetry, like shimmering pearls themselves |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You nailed it! Beautiful! Finally, I have time to read in here.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like white on rice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice edges ms gs, a pleasure to wear these words on my mind |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Much enjoyed this pearl of thought. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I say being immursed in thought is not nessisarly languishing. I keep insosting but they don't believe me Loved this one adagio |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Remembering.... along with you.  L, M K |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Donna....your heart is just bleeding ache...I loved this |
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Nightingale Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 31Depths of The Unkown, UK |
made me ache with you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Sometimes, on my side of some no where, this feeling plays there" at the edge of my mind" yes indeed gentle Donna sometimes that feeling can be so real hugs to you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gracious thanks to each of you for touching here and leaving me with a smile. Ya'll are fantastic, and so very appreciated.
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From title, to last word...I enjoyed this one very much. Excellent job here, Donna. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This was great aunt donna |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, decidedly beautiful, GS. |
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