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Open Poetry #40

2 mermaids and a shark

MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

0 posted 2007-06-28 10:00 PM

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A moment of wonder
A moment of truth
A moment of passion
A moment of lust
Two mermaids and a shark

How wonderful it would be
For the shark not to be malicious
And want to eat the mermaids
In harmony they would live…
Loving each otherthat would be the dream
But the shark wants all the mermaids
Not just the two…that aren’t scared to get too close

How happy it would be
For the mermaids to share the ocean with the shark
To glide side by side in perfect union
To rest in each others fins…
All loving, all honesty , all trust

But what is the shark’s true dream?
Can you tell me?

Jen--->MindBodySoul

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (06-29-2007 09:49 PM).]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-28 11:26 PM

happily ever after?

beautiful poem and nice imagination

have a good evening, dear lady.

MarkG
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 48
California USA

2 posted 2007-06-29 12:54 PM

ah but it is a cruel world isnt it? and we all know what the shark wants and dreams about...Heaven will be better my friend...we just have to make it there...for now we God's light to show us the way...wait what am I talking about...your poem is about Sharks and mermaids...tc mermaid n

Great writing I enjoyed it

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-06-29 10:41 AM

The shark will swim peacefully with the mermaids when the lion lies down with the lamb.

~ and it may takes a while! All in divine time!

I enjoyed your thought-provoking poem.

Love, Harmony, & Peace,

EA

Nightingale
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 31
Depths of The Unkown, UK

4 posted 2007-06-30 03:59 AM

oh my, the title caught my eye.
deep poetry here.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-06-30 06:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

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