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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-06-28 06:37 AM

afternoons were dirt roads
behind the wood fences
and out of town

meander kind of pathways
with watery promises beyond
where we couldn't go

with just our hold hands on
and fresh prints on windows
with their halfway rolled down

like someone was looking in
watching sin get slippery
and I said it was god

or a tree named joe
or maybe the clouds had hands
to keep the sun from watching

and we laughed without our shirts on

_____________

daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-06-28 07:27 AM

this made me smile Mr Daark... in a carefree and smiling way

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-06-28 08:19 AM

"with just our hold hands on
and fresh prints on windows
with their halfway rolled down

like someone was looking in
watching sin get slippery
and I said it was god"

I love how you write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-06-28 05:35 PM

there are times when I read you that I get that warm fuzzy feelin'....

this is one of those times.

Enjoyed this babe.

No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2007-06-28 09:08 PM

a tree named joe
would always peek in the window
halfway down or not
that's what they do

love the way you worded this
can feel the dust and the heat

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-06-28 10:17 PM

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2007-06-29 05:45 AM

Smiles. Dirt roads have a way with people.

"like someone was looking in
watching sin get slippery
and I said it was god

or a tree named joe
or maybe the clouds had hands
to keep the sun from watching"

you're awesome

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2007-06-29 06:36 AM

thanks ladies for letting me scribble in your readbooks, you are all wonderful

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2007-07-01 12:19 PM

"and we laughed without our shirts on"

stranger darlin'
no shirts seems to cause more heat
and I love this poem

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

9 posted 2007-07-01 05:31 PM

I am thinking of a hot, dusty dirt road that we took to the river (creek? stream?) to swin on summer days. Barefeet, laughing and trying to swim in a small pool that came to our waist. Water ice cold and day so hot.

Thank you for bringing a memory to my mind.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2007-07-02 06:27 AM

ladyone thanks hon

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ms az, yep, that is the place, thank you for looking back

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