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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2007-06-27 09:14 PM


**for my sister in law Tammy and my beautiful nephew Gavin**




I knew your eyes would smile
just like your daddy’s
but I didn’t know
how far reaching
how deep
into the very heart of me
they would touch

It overwhelms me
humbles
you are
Wondrous
Precious
and more beautiful
than even I thought
possible

Little man
I never knew
I was capable of a love
such as this….
until you

It destroys and renews
my very existence
and every day
I thank God
for letting me
be the one
you call
Mom.

~SEA~



© Copyright 2007 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-06-27 09:32 PM


a most fine mother/child bond (tribute) 'write'!

I especially love:

"It destroys and renews
my very existence"

applause!!

SmartChick
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2 posted 2007-06-27 09:49 PM


Awwww Sea, this is so beautiful.
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3 posted 2007-06-28 01:15 AM


this was a great poem
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4 posted 2007-06-28 01:59 AM


Aww.... how sweet.  Excellent piece SEA.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-06-28 06:20 AM


Beautiful, touching and heartfelt! A mother's love is unconditional and always present ...lovely words here SEA...  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-06-28 06:21 AM


Wonderful...James
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2007-06-28 07:26 AM


You've captured a beautiful bond through your words, Susan. Just lovely. I hope you gave a copy to your sister-in-law! Very much enjoyed.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

SEA
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8 posted 2007-06-28 08:16 AM


thank you all very much!

Yes, Kit I gave her a copy of this before I posted it. Right after Gavin was born. He is the cutest little bundle of baby...*sigh*

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9 posted 2007-06-28 06:58 PM


Yo madre...  
great poem I really liked it!!!
It seems very emotional....
  

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10 posted 2007-06-30 11:36 PM


Such a lovely tribute
for Tammy & Gavin and
written by a lovely woman

Alison

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11 posted 2007-07-01 10:26 AM


Touching...I love this one!!  

It IS amazing the depth of love for a child!  

hugs, g

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