Open Poetry #40 |
until you.... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
**for my sister in law Tammy and my beautiful nephew Gavin** I knew your eyes would smile just like your daddy’s but I didn’t know how far reaching how deep into the very heart of me they would touch It overwhelms me humbles you are Wondrous Precious and more beautiful than even I thought possible Little man I never knew I was capable of a love such as this…. until you It destroys and renews my very existence and every day I thank God for letting me be the one you call Mom. ~SEA~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine mother/child bond (tribute) 'write'! I especially love: "It destroys and renews my very existence" applause!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Sea, this is so beautiful. |
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Forever in Love Junior Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 24 |
this was a great poem |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
Aww.... how sweet. Excellent piece SEA. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Beautiful, touching and heartfelt! A mother's love is unconditional and always present ...lovely words here SEA... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured a beautiful bond through your words, Susan. Just lovely. I hope you gave a copy to your sister-in-law! Very much enjoyed. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much! Yes, Kit I gave her a copy of this before I posted it. Right after Gavin was born. He is the cutest little bundle of baby...*sigh* |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Yo madre... great poem I really liked it!!! It seems very emotional.... One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a lovely tribute for Tammy & Gavin and written by a lovely woman Alison |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Touching...I love this one!! It IS amazing the depth of love for a child! hugs, g |
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