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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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(an oldie from years ago) Forgiveness may not have come in time, like I thought it had, I still feel pain when you touch, I cry again, and I'm still sad. I've tried to muster the energy to start this love brand new, but really, nothing's changed and there's nothing you can do. It's a shame to know someone so many years and not be friends, battle scars caused by open wounds that forgiveness cannot cleanse. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great rhyme and the style is Dixie through and through, brilliant...thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 a brilliant way to describe the unraveling of trust.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
much enjoyed the read Dixie  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
There are some things I have forgiven and only a few I have not. nice to read your work again! adagio |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sad. again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps a Forgiveness Salve made with some lavender would heal those wounds.  Hugs to you, Ms Dixie, Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A beautiful poem Dixie and one I so enjoyed, isn't it great to have some oldies to fall back on and share, we should all do this from time to time. Have a great day. Rick |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
An oldie but goodie!! JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is a very sad, emotional piece of writing that holds the truth within its words. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It is so sad isn't it -- and you said it so well A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautifully done Dixie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts on forgiveness...to me a part of love...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sad poem...but well written . hugs, g |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Then and now, you express yourself so clearly in the emotions of your art. So many can relate to the hopelessness of a dying love. How wonderful to reach the other side of the chasm left in a human heart. Well done Dixie. |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Lovely and heart breaking sis. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dixie...I hope you are well. Forgiveness is such a miracle really, if one can muster it. It takes much strength.  |
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