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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2007-06-26 04:23 PM

When ya' gonna love me
like you do
do
do ?
When ya' gonna love me
like I want you to ?
When ya' gonna hold me
long into the night ?
Like you did back then
when it all was right~
How ya' gonna love me
from so far away ?
Come on back, Baby,
make my night and my day~
I'm gonna love you
like never before
Once then twice
forevermore~
Whatcha' gonna do
to let me know
that you still want my loving
like you did before ?
When ya' gonna love me
like you do
do
do ?
Hurry up now, Baby,
I'm a waitin' on you~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-06-26 04:29 PM

Nice...waiting builds desire and anticipation...James

SEA

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Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-06-26 05:13 PM

sounds like a song!

super cute!!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-06-26 06:29 PM

So good and fun to read. Poem of love and romance never bore me. But when read this one, yours, a surprise to me. I will go back to read more of your poem in other forum.

wonderful

many hugs and kisses
and have a marvelous day, dear Marge!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-06-26 06:53 PM

cute one Marge

RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

5 posted 2007-06-26 09:50 PM

In my head there's a backbeat and a blues guitar playing.

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

6 posted 2007-06-26 10:05 PM

Nifty, Marge...I do, do, do!

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

7 posted 2007-06-26 10:09 PM

Can't believe I'm saying this but it was a "cute" poem. LOL. It really did sound like a song.... with a jazz theme to it.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2007-06-27 07:36 AM

If you pick out a solid tune, you've got a nice song there Marge! Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2007-06-28 08:08 AM

Thanks, everyone~
Actually, it DID come to me as a little sing-a-long tune while I was merrily driving along on my way to Daytona Beach~

I'm *smiling*, cause my Bill does sing and play guitar ...

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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