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Open Poetry #40

Lighter than Expected

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-06-26 01:33 PM

         there was confusion in Eve's  eyes

she was desperately trying to get her dough to rise

                         but it wouldn't

it couldn't be

Martha White told her that adding yeast could help her see

but the more she kneeded

the more she needed

                           her husband

                                                                      love,

                                                                      ms. fulton

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

1 posted 2007-06-26 01:40 PM

I enjoyed this clever little poem. EVE?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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2 posted 2007-06-26 07:41 PM

cute one

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2007-06-27 12:48 PM

thanks dingusjr and passing shadows

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