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How many miles....???
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How many miles....??? |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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How many miles could you walk... in a size five, when you wear a size nine? Not more than a mile when the shoes are mine... How many miles can you walk in a size nine when you wear a size five? not more than a mile it appears, since walking any farther in my shoes, to you wouldn't be worth the tears.. How many miles could I walk.. in a size nine or five? when I wear a size so small?? The order you've placed has become much to tall... I just barely learned to crawl, haven't yet started school, just graduated from the kiddy pool, I could never walk a block in those shoes, they do not fit and they've been used, but I would walk a thousand miles with you, in my own shoes, they're blue and white!!! walking out of the darkness together and journeying through the light.... [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (06-27-2007 11:45 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the concept here great write and lovely ending!  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
sometimes it is hard for a man to not compare present companion for someone in his past...u just have to keep reminding him, by just being yourself...nicely expressed. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
JulieAnne I like this!  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you all so much.... Dixie~~~you were my inspiration RDB~~~I love the quote~~~"Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight........." it is something definitely worth contemplating on and something I need to think about right now!!! Marcel~~~you read the meaning behind this better than I did!!! Thank you all again. Take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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