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Open Poetry #40
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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
0 posted 2007-06-24 10:54 PM



I washed the dirt away
It ached, knowing your scent would follow
Was there anything that wouldn't erode?
probably just the questions...

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos
© Copyright 2007 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-24 11:03 PM

very beautiful! short but means deep.

enjoyed.

happy summer vacation!!!
MarkG
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since 2007-06-21
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California USA
2 posted 2007-06-24 11:19 PM

wow...not too short lot to ponder here...i really love this one...be proud of this one

Mark
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-25 04:46 AM

Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-06-25 09:10 PM

powerful
Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2007-06-27 09:27 PM

Thank you everyone for your replies
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