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Spirits Jade
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Spirits Jade |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spirits Jade Music bestows Its heart within The falling fountain Laurel blooms Splash pink and white Silk slipper mountain Skip, in quizzical relief Of pen and ink The fates bequeath In fingers running Softly vertical The stroke of noon As this, a quiet place The spirits sway. They dance presuming Shadow play in shade Green, in ever happiness Is played Fall down, fall down Run rivers with the sound Content about the pool Remain as jade, imprints bejewel Festival of shade and shine Glimmer in the eyes of time Beseech a day, move effortlessly In mandarin spray Again, the spill Continuous from full to nil A fountain sings of many things Left dangling Copyright Kkh 6/24/07 |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful Poem.again beautiful. will come back to read again! enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
to be or not to be, that was once the question....and now, the question is, "what's up Doc??" Nicely done my friend, and welcome home... good to have you on the boards |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
ThisDiamond, I'm afraid I couldn't get into this one. It doesn't seem to make much sence. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
As this, a quiet place The spirits sway. They dance presuming Shadow play in shade yes I've missed reading you beautiful scene here |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wonderful write my friend...the last two lines could not have been more perfect...!! jwesley |
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