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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Renewed Marked the day . . . Met her, and my heart beat crazy Love Thirty-two years ago . . . And still I can’t be without her, still love her with crazy beats, shallow breaths, heat flooding my soul. Marked the day . . . Today my love renewed As it has been – everyday, for thirty-two years and counting – On tomorrow, so I can say it again, and again . . . and again. Met her this morning, and my heart beat crazy Love . . . And still I can’t be without her, still love her with crazy beats, shallow breaths, heat flooding my soul. Marked the day . . . She married me. ~~~ © wesley james beard, jr. june 2007 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwwwwwwww *sighs* this is so completely romantic...  happy anniversary!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love your crazy love! Bonne Anniversaire! Happy Anniversary!  May the passion, joy, and mutual adoration continue forevermore! I know that receiving a love poem like this would certainly add fuel to my marital fires ~ if I was still married! lol You are a very sweet man ~ and poet! Linda |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am so glad that your heart still beats 'crazy love' for her - and I love this poem lots and lots. I know she does too. Alison |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Jwesley, You did nice work on this poem, and good on you both. Don't capitalize "On" in "on tomorrow" Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very lovely... I use to feel that, share that for those number of years... entering 37 but not counting the last 5 even though the memories stay alive for me~~ M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 incredible! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Jimmie, This is one of my favorite poems I've read today. You have one classy style man! All blessing to you. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Congratulations to you both! |
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