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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-06-22 08:45 PM

Just A Sigh

Forgetting themselves
Last donned in the ghostly glow
Of an ambiguous moon

Leaves dance
Carefree in the whisper of the wind

Dressing up in summer’s subtlety
Though inquisitive; scurried, pleaded and pinned

White wing to sing, red hood to beat

Forgetting themselves
In the green canopy pleat

Trickles, my mind
Left to wander with discover

How I missed the bluebird wonder
Of a newly planted field

Aloud to be lost in the music
Brushing past, rain’s fate is sealed

Lost in the twirl of the dreams that they drop

The leaves pay no mind, to the peace that I find
Cheerfully facing now sunlit tree top

As they sway in the drink of a thick white sky

Forgetting themselves to the questions and answers
When why just a sigh given after

Copyright Kky 6/20/07

lacydee
Member

since 2007-06-17

Posts 130
Indiana

1 posted 2007-06-22 09:20 PM

very pretty. I like this one. Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-06-22 09:26 PM

I am especially fond of:

“Forgetting themselves….

Leaves dance
Carefree in the whisper of the wind…”

and:

“How I missed the bluebird wonder
Of a newly planted field…”

fine imagery!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-06-22 09:43 PM

you always paint a pretty picture

nice to read you again

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2007-06-23 05:50 PM

Ah . . . much enjoyed, my friend...
jwesley

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-06-23 06:34 PM

"As they sway in the drink of a thick white sky

Forgetting themselves to the questions and answers
When why just a sigh given after"

Awesome!
Excellent write Kathy.

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2007-06-24 08:22 PM

Kathleen.. this is quite lovely! thanks for sharing RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2007-06-25 07:41 AM

I loved it...so nicely and intelegently done

Thank you

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-06-25 09:33 AM

A lovely blend of your mind, powers of observation, your spirit ~ and your talent!

Giving you a warm, hug of love,

EA

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

9 posted 2007-06-25 05:45 PM

takes a moment and extends it to forever...your word play does the same......

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2007-06-25 07:49 PM

"Leaves dance
Carefree in the whisper of the wind'
Oh, I love it when those leaves dance like that! Nicely written imagery!

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