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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2007-06-22 08:13 PM


                     
Artist: Talantbek Chekirov

Adam & Eve Lovers
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

I quiver at the sight of you.
At your touch, my knees grow weak.
My tummy fills with butterflies,
~ Trembling lips can scarcely speak.

My heart beats beneath my breast,
Pulsing like a drummer’s drum.
Half-lidded eyes glaze over,
~ Cheeks flush from manly rum.

Your scent fills up my senses,
With the essence of ocean breeze.
Your velvet voice is resonant,
~ You move with pride and ease.

As stars stud the evening skies,
And mystic moon does rise,
We're Adam & Eve lovers,
~ In an Eden paradise.


Love is the unifying force which integrates
one’s soul with that of another.
~ Linda L. Dowd

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-23-2007 09:54 AM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2007-06-22 10:05 PM


Wonderful!!

loved the flow here

jwesley
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2 posted 2007-06-23 03:18 PM


Makes perfect sense to me!! Wonderful way of putting it too! Mucho enjoyed this...j.
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3 posted 2007-06-23 04:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is another most romantic serenade from your heart, dearest friend, you truly must have skipped a few dozen generations as you write with the pure heart of an ancient romantic songstress, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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4 posted 2007-06-23 04:20 PM


Nice...James
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-06-23 05:11 PM


Hi, SEA! Low C! lol

Thanks for your nice reply!

It was good to hear from you!


EA

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6 posted 2007-06-23 05:17 PM


jwesley ~

"makes perfect sense to me" ~ and after reading your poem "Renewed", I can understand why!

Loves 'n hugs,

Linda

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2007-06-23 05:22 PM


Noah ~

"an ancient songstress" ~ Hmm, I like that!

As for me being romantic ~ yeppers! To the max! ~ Just like yourself! But in fact, I believe you are even more romantic than I am! lol

I appreciate your warm response to my poem!

To love and romance,

Linda


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8 posted 2007-06-23 05:24 PM


James ~

"Nice" is nice!   Merci beaucoups! Thank you very much.



Linda

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9 posted 2007-06-23 05:51 PM


Linda

You write with elegant grace
and share so much beauty of who you are.

We are blessed to have you in our midst.

Alison

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10 posted 2007-06-23 06:31 PM


A real beauty!

JL


What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

MyEnchanted_Melody
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11 posted 2007-06-23 06:40 PM



Adam & Eve

Wouldn't we all wish to be in such paradise?

You have penned it wonderfully

Thank you
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12 posted 2007-06-23 09:20 PM


very pretty

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2007-06-24 08:15 AM


aziza ~

My goodness, Alison!~ You have me beaming from 'wingtip' to 'wingtip'! lol

Thank you for the kind words. They mean a great deal. And might I add, "rightbackatchya!"

Thank you very much ~ and have a great summer!

Loving hug and smiles across the miles,

Linda

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14 posted 2007-06-24 08:16 AM


JL ~

Thanks, Tex Man!

Sending a hugaroo to you!

EA

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15 posted 2007-06-24 08:18 AM


MyEnchanted Melody ~

Why, thank you very much, MEM

May your Eden be a loverly one!



EA

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16 posted 2007-06-24 08:20 AM


Passing Shadows ~

Thanks for the "pretty", Pretty One!



Linda

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