Open Poetry #40 |
Adam & Eve Lovers |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Artist: Talantbek Chekirov Adam & Eve Lovers ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ I quiver at the sight of you. At your touch, my knees grow weak. My tummy fills with butterflies, ~ Trembling lips can scarcely speak. My heart beats beneath my breast, Pulsing like a drummer’s drum. Half-lidded eyes glaze over, ~ Cheeks flush from manly rum. Your scent fills up my senses, With the essence of ocean breeze. Your velvet voice is resonant, ~ You move with pride and ease. As stars stud the evening skies, And mystic moon does rise, We're Adam & Eve lovers, ~ In an Eden paradise. Love is the unifying force which integrates one’s soul with that of another. ~ Linda L. Dowd [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-23-2007 09:54 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wonderful!! loved the flow here |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Makes perfect sense to me!! Wonderful way of putting it too! Mucho enjoyed this...j. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is another most romantic serenade from your heart, dearest friend, you truly must have skipped a few dozen generations as you write with the pure heart of an ancient romantic songstress, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Hi, SEA! Low C! lol Thanks for your nice reply! It was good to hear from you! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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jwesley ~ "makes perfect sense to me" ~ and after reading your poem "Renewed", I can understand why! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Noah ~ "an ancient songstress" ~ Hmm, I like that! As for me being romantic ~ yeppers! To the max! ~ Just like yourself! But in fact, I believe you are even more romantic than I am! lol I appreciate your warm response to my poem! To love and romance, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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James ~ "Nice" is nice! Merci beaucoups! Thank you very much. Linda |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Linda You write with elegant grace and share so much beauty of who you are. We are blessed to have you in our midst. Alison |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A real beauty! JL What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Adam & Eve Wouldn't we all wish to be in such paradise? You have penned it wonderfully Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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aziza ~ My goodness, Alison!~ You have me beaming from 'wingtip' to 'wingtip'! lol Thank you for the kind words. They mean a great deal. And might I add, "rightbackatchya!" Thank you very much ~ and have a great summer! Loving hug and smiles across the miles, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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JL ~ Thanks, Tex Man! Sending a hugaroo to you! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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MyEnchanted Melody ~ Why, thank you very much, MEM May your Eden be a loverly one! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Passing Shadows ~ Thanks for the "pretty", Pretty One! Linda |
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