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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. June The first firefly— All alone On and off And on again . |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Hi John! This one is truly exceptional. There seems to be at least three ways to read it. First as a painting, second as a celebration, and third for its melancholy undertone. All three elements come together perfectly. Best, Jim |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
What a talent to create an image and emotion from a few well chosen words. beautiful. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very well done, my friend... j. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 outstanding! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Magical!  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks everyone I do better just hanging around with my eyes open until a poem shows up Thanks again John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a little boy runs around and jumps up and down To chase the last dancing light in first summer dawn "Daddy, I caught it" He cheerfully drops the ray along with his memory into his heart of loving song where all the shines belong. ******* Now, you can close your eyes now.  [This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-25-2007 03:38 PM).] |
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