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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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writing pigeons on statues with my eyes closed in gloves just for the decoration of black on white or versa verses there is no god in my pen or even in my room less mind when the percussion moves me to press sounds to stone and outline the echoes on walls as a painter with convulsions enjoying the accidental spills but never getting any on him until the morning after allows dry paint to be wet again like second hand loving from outside your/her windows then the poetry is just your breathing ____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your quiet persuasion, er, persistence, is lovely... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and outline the echoes on walls as a painter with convulsions" I liked that description  enjoyed the read mister  |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
thanks for the trip |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"then the poetry is just your breathing" that is so beautiful...just wanted to say that |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"then the poetry is just your breathing" and your poetry breathes. You bring it to life.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks my friend for the touch ___________ ms suesea, thanks to you twice as much as you can imagine ____________ shirtless, thanks for the ride along on this one ______________ donna, thank you for wearing my words with your eyes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooooooo...nice |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
until the morning after allows dry paint to be wet again like second hand loving from outside your/her windows then the poetry is just your breathing --- This is incredible. and beautiful Enjoyed muchly, A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie, thanks babe!! _____________ lil A, you bless me often with your eyes thank you much |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Breathing your words in, like the scent of a very fine poetic cigar. contemplative and pleasing to the senses D. love, reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regal one, I'd smoke one with you anytime, thanks babe.. |
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kateyezz New Member
since 2007-06-23
Posts 2 |
~smiles~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Kateyezz...now that is a sexy smile, thanks ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark... I'm very glad you are back writing for us... your words always smile me! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms RB, thank you for coming by and reading ...I appreciate you ms |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
i like this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lilibee....thank you so much |
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