Open Poetry #40 |
Giver Of Words |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
He is the giver of words that awaken senses long forgotten, to make the meek fill with sensuality, and the brazen turn shy. He is the giver of words lighting the day ..... lighting the way... A special touch of thought, of heart teaching life lessons abundant in his wisdom.. through his eyes seen the world in dawn of new day.... each day better for the gift he gives..... from the twinkle eye smile to sensuous style, mixed with soul warmth and the caring of eternal friendships.... always true to himself.... his friends....... teacher of heart words, through his minds view.... teacher of life, visiting through his words, a never ending adventure of journeys into the lessons of life. He is sweetness wrapped in poetic sensuality, He is a giver of words and yet, much more...... He is friend. {revised 6-22-07}
|
||
© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"He is sweetness wrapped in poetic sensuality, He is a giver of words and yet, much more...... He is friend." most definately, he is awww, Donna, I love this |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
||
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna, he would be blessed by this...and your gentle spirit, enjoyed it |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
||
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"teacher of heart words," we need more of those. millions! what a wonderful tribute, Somy. |
||
adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Hey Hey ,Wow Wow! wonderfull piece enjoyed adagio |
||
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful gentle Donna |
||
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Donna (may I call you that?) -- Your poems just settle something inside me as I read. It's like ... you know when water laps against a dock? It's kind of like that. Your words touch my heart and I leave with a smile. Alison |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are all smile makers, and givers of words and I thank you for leaving such kind words here. D...as I am also blessed by his his spirit. And yes, Aziza, you may call me Donna, if you so chose. thanks and peace to all. No more hangin' on to the past No more filling up my tomorrows With yesterday's sorrows No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-01-2007 09:14 PM).] |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna ... I'm sure that I know who you mean...and it is so true what you wrote so beautifully. |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aww Martie, that means alot to me, thank you sweet lil' friend of mine.
|
||
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Donna... for some reason when I was reading this, the name Mr Daark came to mind... I find him to be a 'giver of words' much like yourself sweet friend ... very much enjoyed.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
RDB, thank you so much for stopping by. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |