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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-06-21 06:51 AM

back seat full of look back shoes
all dusty now it seems
we haven't worn them for a summer

but I bet they still would fit
our bare foot hurry-ups
if we helped each other a little

with the fitting them on and together
or between each other
where ever comfortable was fuzzy

and I know our hands would notice too
how fingers like to play
in back yards under secret sheds

and eventually the whole neighborhood
of our recollections would gather
on the porch side of maybe even

across from the gypsy gin occasion

___________

daark

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-06-21 07:43 AM

This has such beauty tinged with just the right amount of melancholy added to it. Mmm, you do stir up such a delightful concoction flavored with just enough of all the right stuff DarkMasterfulOne.. Much enjoyed these words this morning (oh yeah, that's every morning tho

)

No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

2 posted 2007-06-21 11:39 AM

Dark Stranger,

Somehow this seems to run all together for me. I can drag no meaning out of it.

Bobby

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-06-21 12:49 PM

A beautiful piece and not that dark.

good

enjoyed

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2007-06-21 01:39 PM

Hi DS

"on the porch side of maybe even" I think I have left some loafers there and one flip flop. Hi!

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2007-06-21 05:25 PM

With summer comes the yearnings of yesteryears... of being young, mischievious, spontaneous, carefree... loved where this poem took me! much enjoyed!

~Moonkist

Freedom Now

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2007-06-21 06:13 PM

s, thanks lady friend

________

bobby, thanks for the read anyway

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drauntz, humble thanks for the eyes

__________

ms martie, thank you neighbor lady

_____________

moon, thanks for the touch on the word edge

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2007-06-22 06:53 AM

For some reason, I feel as if I had
been led to a dance...

and smiling all the way.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2007-06-22 06:08 PM

and such a lovely dancer you are ms sun
thanks for the read babe

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

9 posted 2007-06-23 11:28 AM

HOLY POOP, BATMAN! You are a poet. Clever and poignant.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

10 posted 2007-06-23 11:34 AM

I guess I am a little too young to remember gypsy gin, but I do remember the secret sheds and curious fingers!!

Take care my Daaark Stranger, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2007-06-23 08:10 PM

thanks shirtless..appreciate your comment

____________

angelking, thank you for the smile maker ms

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