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Open Poetry #40

Devoted To Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-20 08:23 AM

Devoted To Love

If I could live my life
all over again
I'd want to learn how
to accept, love and
forgive, in the first
part of my life.

But I can't live the
first part of my life
all over again, for
it has already been
sacrificed to controlling,
manipulation and criticism.

But now that I have lived one
part of my life in controlling
and another part of my life
in loving and caring,
I can assure you that
the rest of my life
will be devoted to love.

JamesLee
20June
2007

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-06-20 03:21 PM

all we can do is live from today onward

good write

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-20 03:36 PM

beautiful and romantic again and as always.

and a good thought about the past.

enjoyed.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-06-20 03:48 PM

To learn from the past is a blessing! Enjoyed!

Joty
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 15
Florida

4 posted 2007-06-20 04:26 PM

Well Done!! We all should learn from our past! Enjoyed!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-06-20 04:40 PM

Thank you passing shadows, Drauntz, Honeybunch and Joty for the kind responses...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-06-20 05:38 PM

VERY nice 'write'!

[the achievement of true 'wisdom'?!]

Applause!!

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