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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-06-19 09:01 PM


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For that second being
In childhood
Should it come
Finally be
So lucky then

So now there are
Again such Germans
Who may  contend
With mom apple pie
And United States Marines

As will perhaps
Lost in battles
No longer remembering

Fail to notice
At the end

Aging
Fear
And other things


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-19 11:02 PM


I do not know why i read with sadness though it  was about been a child again. might because the ending.


still a beautiful poem

May you have a very good night sir John. and be happy.

many hugs

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-19-2007 11:37 PM).]

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