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Summer Always Answers Prayers Best
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Summer Always Answers Prayers Best |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Summer Always Answers Prayers Best By: Noah Eaton 6/19/06 Today I walked along the boardwalk, and I imagined you were here with me, an hour before dawn kissed the summer sky, checking out whatever seemed interesting, you were like my maiden of the mist, the starry surprise of your eyes made me swoon, and right before I could feel your pristine kiss, I’m left trying to preserve the glow of this honeymoon. And I know, I can feel, your heart song momentarily, and through all these winters, I’ve found there’s an invincible summer, chanting inside of me… I believe summer always answers prayers best, searching the seasons wildly on love’s quest, there’s a feeling I have only fireflies can express, when you leave nothing but tulip beds, and golden threads in my head... There’s something about the mystery of summer, that makes you suffer but enjoy it immensely, my heart beats thunderously chasing you around, with sensitive eyes searching densely and intensely, like a ladybug that lands on my shoulder, you’re like a sweetest memory I’ve yet to understand, fulfilling the promise of dozens of months past, with the touch of your gentle hand... And I know, I can feel, your heart song momentarily, and through all these winters, I’ve found there’s an invincible summer, chanting inside of me... I believe summer always answers prayers best, searching the seasons wildly on love’s quest, there’s a feeling I have only fireflies can express, when you leave nothing but tulip beds, and golden threads in my head... . . . . . . And I know, I can feel, your heart song momentarily, and through all these winters, I’ve found you're an invincible summer, chanting inside of me... I believe summer always answers prayers best, searching the seasons wildly on love’s quest, there’s a feeling I have only fireflies can express, when you leave nothing but tulip beds, and golden threads in my head... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful truly, so well written. so very good. The title says all. have a wonderful day, Angel! and keep running. How are you lately? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, I think this is your best one yet! I love this! love the new pic too |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah!! How are you? It is so good to read you again. I loved your poem and I loved your new photo, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Noah,I enjoyed your latest love poem and I too like the new photo of you.. martyjo |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well now Noah ... if you haven't put this one to music yet ... then you must!  Lyrical, with beautiful phrasing and a lovely chorus. Smile ... your talent is showing, my friend. Much enjoyed. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes lil hip buddie, it sure does seem that summer is a time for prayers being answered. Noah, I truly think this is one of your best ever.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Noah...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May this summer answer your love prayers. This was an especially touching love song that you have written. I was truly moved by the beauty of it. You truly have one of the most romantic souls that I have ever known. Love to you, Angel Man, Linda  P.S. It is wonderful to see a new pic of you posted at PiP. It's about time!!! lol |
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