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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2007-06-16 05:12 PM



The Spirit's Soar

I wonder about tomorrow
as I live my yesterdays.
Each comes and goes
with highs and lows.
Each push a gift to raise
the spirits sore,
from years of weight
with finish line in view.
Always there between the thoughts
that dream the moments through.

My paradise floats in the mind
a nature's walk beside
the morning of the morrow when
I stretch into my stride.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JL
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1 posted 2007-06-16 07:32 PM


"I wonder about tomorrow
as I live my yesterdays.
Each comes and goes
with highs and lows."

A truth for sure.
JL

"The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers."
~Thomas Jefferson


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2 posted 2007-06-16 10:30 PM


OhMzBliss~

I can just see you bounding for the finish line~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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SmartChick
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3 posted 2007-06-17 01:06 AM


I can sure relate to this one. But, I have more lows, than I do highs.
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2007-06-17 09:52 AM


Oh boy Maureen ... you are definately "in your stride". This flowed beautifully ... made "my spirit soar". Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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5 posted 2007-06-17 09:58 PM


I like the way you chnged all those spirits sore into the spirit's soar. That's the way it should be in life.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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