Open Poetry #40 |
Green Park. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Deepening green draws sounds from birds. Camouflaged platforms for their shy songs. Each chorus a different dialect of the same meaning? Refreshing breeze, the air for their bellows, but each more divine, to make the whole complete. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I never tire of hearing bird songs, nor of reading poetry which beats within nature's heart. It's a pleasure to read you, Phil. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Phil, this is beautiful!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
my favorite line! Each chorus a different dialect of the same meaning.... Birds of a feather..flock together... communicating with each other! ~ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a beautiful world you see and write |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a simply superb 'write'! [a most 'refreshing' read!] MUCH applause!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am such a fan of your poems on Nature ~ as well as your romantic, social consciousness, and philosophizing ones! Linda |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful as always. beautiful truly. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello there Seems the trees are talking almost, or the air...the sound of birds is beautiful there and also in your poem. |
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