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Open Poetry #40
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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2007-06-16 04:00 PM

Deepening green draws
sounds from birds.
Camouflaged platforms for
their shy songs.
Each chorus a different
dialect of the same meaning?
Refreshing breeze, the air
for their bellows, but
each more divine,
to make the whole complete.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-06-16 08:05 PM

I never tire of hearing bird songs, nor of reading poetry which beats within nature's heart.
It's a pleasure to read you, Phil.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-06-17 05:46 AM

Phil, this is beautiful!!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-06-18 11:08 AM

my favorite line!

Each chorus a different
dialect of the same meaning....

Birds of a feather..flock together...
communicating with each other!

~ARH
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-06-18 06:38 PM

it's a beautiful world you see and write
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-06-20 07:27 PM

a simply superb 'write'!

[a most 'refreshing' read!]

MUCH applause!!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2007-06-21 08:57 AM

I am such a fan of your poems on Nature ~ as well as your romantic, social consciousness, and philosophizing ones!


Linda
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7 posted 2007-06-21 01:06 PM

beautiful as always. beautiful truly.
Martie
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8 posted 2007-06-21 01:32 PM

Hello there

Seems the trees are talking almost, or the air...the sound of birds is beautiful there and also in your poem.  
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