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Open Poetry #40

[because / she is a bird]

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2007-06-16 12:02 PM

because
she is a bird
that wishes
she could swim

she laughs
when I tell her
she is beautiful

while down here
in the water
the only beauty is
the delusion
you are swimming
in the sky

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-06-16 12:05 PM

This is beautiful...very beautiful piece.

enjoyed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-06-16 12:25 PM

I like this VERY much...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-06-16 03:10 AM

wonderful Anthony!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2007-06-16 04:51 PM

Absolutely love this...it's a keeper

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2007-06-16 05:19 PM

Loving this! Yes, a keeper it is!

miscellanea

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