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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. 
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Whisper my name Brush past me softly Drown in my eyes Warm and defiant Challenge me to lose Our game of ego To say yes this time Then go home Shower it all away The impulses to draw close To look for me in a glance Cleanse yourself of scent As it washes over your memory Blind yourself to my knowing smile My voice caressing your imagination At last when the room is nothing but steam Know that I won and... Remember to forget me |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow, you write beautifully. it is a whisper. soft and quiet. enjoyed happily |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Thank you very much Drauntz. ~Winter~ "I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow this was like a sauna after a spa - very refreshing that lingers as a pleasant memory after the steam is gone. Very well done. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sis, those last lines got me...but you knew that  love ya |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Thank you Kethry. It seems it is the first in what has become a dangerous mini series. Sis I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love ya much. |
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