Open Poetry #40 |
Just Some, Like Me |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Not all who wander are lost just some, like me. Every now and then the wind comes through and walking to the mailbox at 4 in the morning makes me feel lonely and quite sad too bad there's no kind of warning. I'd run instead of walk then. I should feel good that someone loves me. It's mostly a menace to me these days. I don't admit it's what I really need, it's just a force, tryin' to change my ways. Not all who wander are lost just some, like me. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I don't admit it's what I really need," been there always such an honest heart pouring from you |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sadly haunting, yet beautiful. You know, your poetry is a window that allows us to see your heart. It's a beautiful heart. It really is. A |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
This touches me somehow... but I'm not sure in what way. I'm just a man - I'll blame it on that. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thoughts...when someone cares for me, and they reveal their thoughts, and I realize that I don't feel the same, I tell them that my feelings are not the same, but if they want friendship I can offer that at long as they are able to stay at that level...most relationships will only be friends, and many needs are met at that level. To me, more than one close relationship is complicated, and I don't want complications in my life...I've had my fill of complications...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The first two lines say it all, and say it well. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
As usual your poems are mirrors of your thoughts and the honesty and skill with which you write is a treasure..thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
> < Your not lost sis just follow the silver and gold threads back the way you came. Never forget they bound through eternity. Exquisite. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good. poem of sadness. beautiful. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know what you mean. I only wish there was someone to love me. So you are lucky there. Seems like I have been lost all my life. Never knew who I was, or where I was going. And, I often wonder, why am I here? Hope I find out, before it is too late. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Your words always touch me deeply Hope |
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