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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2007-06-15 10:28 AM

Not all who wander are lost

just some, like me.

Every now and then the wind comes through
and walking to the mailbox at 4 in the morning
makes me feel lonely and quite sad
too bad there's no kind of warning.

I'd run instead of walk then.

I should feel good that someone loves me.
It's mostly a menace to me these days.
I don't admit it's what I really need,
it's just a force, tryin' to change my ways.

Not all who wander are lost

just some, like me.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-06-15 10:30 AM

"I don't admit it's what I really need,"

been there

always such an honest heart pouring from you

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-06-15 03:08 PM

Sadly haunting, yet beautiful. You know, your poetry is a window that allows us to see your heart. It's a beautiful heart. It really is.

A

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

3 posted 2007-06-15 03:49 PM

This touches me somehow... but I'm not sure in what way. I'm just a man - I'll blame it on that.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-06-15 03:55 PM

Thoughts...when someone cares for me, and they reveal their thoughts, and I realize that I don't feel the same, I tell them that my feelings are not the same, but if they want friendship I can offer that at long as they are able to stay at that level...most relationships will only be friends, and many needs are met at that level. To me, more than one close relationship is complicated, and I don't want complications in my life...I've had my fill of complications...James

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-06-15 04:54 PM

The first two lines say it all, and say it well.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2007-06-15 04:54 PM

As usual your poems are mirrors of your thoughts and the honesty and skill with which you write is a treasure..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

Winter Butterfly
Member

since 2007-02-03

Posts 61
The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.

7 posted 2007-06-15 11:06 PM

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Your not lost sis just follow the silver and gold threads back the way you came. Never forget they bound through eternity.

Exquisite.

"The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump."

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-06-15 11:37 PM

good. poem of sadness.

beautiful.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2007-06-16 02:27 AM

I know what you mean. I only wish there was someone to love me. So you are lucky there. Seems like I have been lost all my life. Never knew who I was, or where I was going. And, I often wonder, why am I here? Hope I find out, before it is too late.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2007-06-16 02:24 PM

Your words always touch me deeply

Hope

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