Open Poetry #40 |
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the concrete rose Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33 |
Now, this isn't a very lovely poem like the one I posted before. It's one I wrote not too long ago. Thought it would make an interesting talk. Ad now for your viewing pleasure Step right up. STEP RIGHT UP STEP RIGHT UP Hurray Hurray Hurray! Ladies and Gentlemen, have I got the SHOW OF THE CENTURY just for you!! Our carnivale Extrodinaire is here to shock and amaze with the wide eyed wonder of the unimaginable, quite tangible SUPER SCARY REALITY! In this co-o-o-o-orner! We have The 3 job woman also known as Motherum Stressedis Who suffers from 2 KID SYNDROME and lives on her very own! Behold the text book stack of federal notice and the crows under visual luggage due to Loss of sleep from her young ones and tired of roaming for a stable mate and stable cotton greens Hide your wallets Good sirs, they come from areas where crime is common!! ALSO We have perched w-w-w-way over here!! A group of rabid and hungry children. ALSO known as Starivca malnourishum. 800 of this dwindling population DIE EVERY HOUR! It's amazing we've been able to keep them alive for so long! Notice the abnormally large stomaches and sucked in jawlines. NUH UH UH!! Please don't feed them!( Our managers up in the White Suite and Oval meeting rooms don't. ) THE SHOW GOES ON LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!! Behold!... With your very eyes.. .. The Dreaded Junkie! Also called desire-in Overhwelmas Yessir, every family has one they make for GREAT stories This one suffers from Heroinitis, a disease of the mind caused from abundant consumption of their favorate meal THE COCOA BEAN, which also makes chocolate! ( Yummeh' ) Take a gander to the shivering posture and often angry and unexpecting behavior. Not to close to the cage! If you let one pinch you you become one of them! and the coca bean is easy to get in the Concrete Jungles of NY. Not frightened yet!?!?! Then allow me to present to you.. the weeping childless woman!! Also called Tearsarefrom Gunninga This depressing and unfortunate species Lost her child in the desert from a Death March issued by her tribal elders ORIGINALLY they are happy but confused of the cubs desicions. And that is when the Olive branch warriors confirm his death and tell her. BEFORE YOUR EYES SHE FINALLY SNAPS! Be careful not to talk to to her, for she may cry from being reminded of her son in any way! Well Now Ladies and Gentlemen The tour is now UP! for now. More attractions will come soon Such as an actual breed of people who hate different kinds of people!! Or a species that fends for itself from birth!( The parents typically die the first few years from natural causes like Metal and Gunpowder.) AND FOR THIS MONTH ONLY! We'll present you with a leader of the INFAMOUS Haliburton tribe! Be careful though, he's a real " Dick " with a sporatic trigger finger. Good Day to you! |
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that last part made me laugh...the tongue in cheek is great Welcome to Pip! |
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