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The Fourth Day |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Mary He softly said As she passed him by She turned and replied With sad brown eyes Ah My Love Had you only known It should have been You and I . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'write'! serious applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
A beautiful short poem. enjoyed. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is such a quiet, simple poem. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Oh so short and sweet, but filled with so much emotion and feeling. I loved it. Awesome!!!!!!!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Delightful and sad John and very nicely said... I have missed your words... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So much longing captured in so few words. Beautifully penned Huan Yi. Much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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