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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Gull Harbor Penitent sunset fine-sculpted rocks bathed in crimson and amethyst sea birds shadow-dancing along the shore metaphysical moon rising footprints fading with the gentle tide... a small boat drifts away ~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sea birds shadow-dancing along the shore" liked this very much, you paint a beautiful picture  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely....the last line perfect. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
I live near the shoreline and your poem was like a painting in words of that beach scene. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
paullallady - and for all of us who wish we were at the shoreline, a little visual vacation and a reminder of the eternal qualities of the sea, the moon, and the horizon. Fine minimalism! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a beauty. but different style. beautiful again. |
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