Open Poetry #40 |
Spilt Milk |
RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Spilt Milk No ones ever done me wrong I’ve simply let a few – take the option I had given them to play me for a fool. For their faults and inclinations were clear as day – no mystery I just chose to hope they’d overcome and I looked the other way. And though I’ve suffered at their hands from broken heart and lightened purse - I well knew their inner nature so they don’t deserve my curse. And as I believe the universe will balance out the tilt they’ll get to live with their indiscretions and the milk that they have spilt. [This message has been edited by RogueandPoet (06-12-2007 03:13 PM).] |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
wow.. nice poem i especially liked the last stanza. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminded me of my thoughts while I was watching Robin Givens last night... Seems she has written a book about her less than pleasurable experiences with Mike Tyson...and I found myself thinking, "Who would be stupid enough to marry Mike Tysen." Hope he doesn't read this and come and beat me up. "Who would be stupid enough to say bad things about Mike Tyson"...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very good, and I shall say, very cool and confident. enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, the Universe has a way of dishing out karma and we can keep our hands clean, so to speak! lol If you meant to write "spilt" instead of "split", you can make edit changes by clicking on on the icon of a document and pencil. (Next to the posting date above your poem) This was a divinely sweet poem. Love & Light, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ahem...methinks it should be spilt, rather than split ahem again... Methinks EA beat me to the edit comment |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Thanks, I've made the correction. I'll be scratching my head wondering how I missed that. |
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