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Love's Riverdance
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Love's Riverdance |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Convergent thoughts... carrying once-reclusive souls from separate sheltered coves, cascade past love’s dams and rapids tumbling willing minds and hearts inside passion’s swirling vortex with emotions’ turbulent rush, merging in rogue-river confluence... seeking sanctuary in peaceful moments to tame the roiling anxiety and debris of life’s high watermarks, and pool at journey’s end in spirit-mates serene embrace. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A ‘river’ of thought ultimately bringing separate, lonely ‘spirit-mate’ souls together in physical and emotional ‘confluence’ via a serene and soothing... healing 'embrace' of love (beyond life’s chaos; etc.)... what a grand-fine analogy and imagery!! sustained applause!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh........oh lady, this is just what I needed to read right now. This is just as lovely as your heart. |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
That was beautiful and wonderful use of the language. As an Oregonian I love the "Rogue River" reference. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Oh the pools from which these pearls come from are bright and glistering...created by the well spring of your lucid mind..thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful as always. enjoyed |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Love the "flow" of this... and the sound. You've captured the feelings well. I must go refind your waterfall poem now, too....3 years ago, I think. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I like "life's high watermarks"very cool |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I came back for another 'read' of this one! I especially loved: "merging in rogue-river confluence... seeking sanctuary in peaceful moments to tame the roiling anxiety and debris of life’s high watermarks..." REALLY fine!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy....water carries so much, even poetry...and especially love.  |
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