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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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just a card perhaps with suggested endings or beginnings hanging upside down and right side up with mouth fulls of water the honey flavored kind and you laughing for moments uncontrollably in your mind as you tended his attention with distracted hands and kept the water on just in case I liked your tea made from day dreams when I came over later after the windows became heavy _______________ daark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice last line there good to read you  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smooth.... and welcome. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Is that like hanging upside down like a bat? Or dancing cheek to cheek? I am trying to get a picture here. Seriously, beautiful and fun. (Is fun ever serious?) A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"right side up" My favorite place to be. Ha, it is good to know I'm not the only one that uses that expression. They call me crazy round these parts when I use that phrase.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie, thank you lady!! ___________ ms sun, always a pleasure to have your eyes ____________ ms az...a bit of both I guess just an image in my mind, thanks _____________ ms donna, thank you lady friend |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Do you know that you write beautifully? Your titles are always evocative, like translations of Native American tongue. Yeah, I said tongue. Laughing. Now brew me some tea, boyeeeeeeeeee! gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Seriously tho, this is lovely, shadowy suggestive, just like an almond-shaped tea stain, on cotton eyelet with a hint of jasmine wafting on a breeze through an open window, covered by sheers... OH. Wow. (Had to slap m'self out of it there!) It is my pleasure to read you again! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi!! A card can do all that???  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene..I brewed several different kinds for you...so the tease are waiting....(grin) you are such a bad girl, I like you, and thanks ms ______________ ms marty, yes most any thought can do it don't you agree? thanks little neighbor |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn AND Wow! A smooth, seductive read.....After all these years you still impress me with your natural talent and unique way of expression Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark... I like your style! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms honey, thanks lady friend ________________ ms rb, thank you for the look up from down under |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'd like some of that tea made from dreams, keep the kettle on for me. Then upside down or right side up is fine with me after all I'm flexible |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I can't help but smile. I wonder about you sometimes how does he do that? from memory and all picture books and little notes. You're awesome D. love, reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kethry, you are perfect then, my new favorite dancer, thanks for the read ms. _________ regal one, you know how I do it, is it not the same skin that makes our souls? thanks lady |
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