A Case In Point: inspired by D.P.'s

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2007-06-11 09:34 PM

If I were breathing poisoned gas
I think that you'd want some of that--
if I were diagnosed diseased--
you'd become sicker than me.
And should I win the lottery
I do believe you'd die of grief.
It's not enough to have the most
you need to have it all and boast
of too much butter on your toast--

and so I gave myself away
so that I could say one day
that there was nothing left of me--
to leave you restless with your greed
to keep you company...

icebox
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in the shadows

1 posted 2007-06-11 10:02 PM

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icebox
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2 posted 2007-06-11 10:04 PM

I am just going to say that I understand this...more than I can express in words.

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serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-06-11 10:15 PM

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serenity blaze
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4 posted 2007-06-11 10:16 PM

For once, lovie, I wish you didn't understand...

*hugs*

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

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5 posted 2007-06-11 10:27 PM

wow, love your tune. strong. can be anything.

but I love this poem

dear SB, have a wonderful night and sleep tight.

hugs and kisses

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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6 posted 2007-06-12 01:09 AM

If you only knew how this hit the mark with what is going on in my life at the moment! Oh....well, maybe you do. Great write, Ser! *hugs*......jo

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

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7 posted 2007-06-12 01:46 AM

I am sure I understand this.If I am wrong,it fits my senses anyway. Love, martyjo

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2007-06-12 05:00 AM

a time in my life, I could have written the same thing...and maybe there will be another in the future, who knows but I hope not

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2007-06-12 07:53 AM

Lordie, I know this K.

Huggin you tight gal.

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2007-06-12 10:29 AM

I know this to a lessor extent. But regardless, I know...they would suck you dry and blame you for dying.

I love you Karen.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14

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11 posted 2007-06-12 10:35 AM

i'm sorry that you have someone in your life like that, i know saying this won't help but, nice poem.

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