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Open Poetry #40

Driving our Anniversary

RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

0 posted 2007-06-10 01:33 PM

Driving our Anniversary

There’s no doubt
    around the corners,
    we’ve a stable suspension
    and good tires.

In heavy traffic
    we maneuver easily
    around delays and
    always find our way.

On long trips we
    have good economy
    and enough power to
    keep pushing ahead.

We’ve been driving together
    for twelve years now -
    a good marriage
    on the road of life.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2007-06-10 01:36 PM

What a beautiful comparison, RoguandPoet. Wonderful analogy and nicely phrased. Much enjoyed.

Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-12 01:53 PM

wow, beautiful.

very good. and the poem talks on its own.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-06-13 06:32 AM

Nice...James

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-06-14 11:27 PM

Good writing - I hope your marriage gets good gas mileage and you always have tread on your tires.

A

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