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Nobody sees the rain
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Nobody sees the rain |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
When the tears fall When the heart breaks The last fall The final ache When your heart burst When your love lost The last waltz The soul cost Nobody sees the rain between the tears You don't hear the thunder Over the drum of a hearts fears. They cannot see beyond or feel the light respond To smile or touch, so fond. Nobody sees the rain Nor feels the healing sun Or believes one day that it will be gone Every hearts ache Every bodies sighs Will end with time then you can dry your eyes To take a lot of pain, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes the rain mixes with the tears so much, you can't tell the difference. I like this one, you point out the fact of life, and you do it with sympathy. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
no more tears..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paul... I like this very much ... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
This poem is wonderful. It made me reminesce about the way I felt after my cousin passed away recently. In a way I still do. |
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