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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-06-05 12:29 PM




                      if she's as "fly" as you say

why don't the two of you fly away

the sky is such big place to play

just square up to that pretty face of hers and tell her that you're tired of going to Eastminster Presbyterian Church to pray

                               without her



                                                                                love,

                                                                                to my big brother

                                                                                candace

                                                                                


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-08 01:08 AM


nice. somebody needs a push. again, like the style.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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2 posted 2007-06-10 07:52 AM


Howard.... I like your style   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-06-21 01:05 PM


thanks drauntz  

thanks roniece  

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