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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2007-06-02 11:49 AM

I smoke too many cigarettes,
I drink too much Crown,
don't get enough sleep,
always there when you're down.

I don't drink enough water,
don't eat like I should,
but if it kills me, I'll smile
and say "life was really good"

just because you loved me

.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2007-06-02 11:56 AM

So true dixie friend , love matters !!!!

Hope

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2007-06-02 11:59 AM

Excellent sentiments. You Are Loved.

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

3 posted 2007-06-02 01:33 PM

This is the truest poem I ever read. We live too much, laugh too loud and love completely. what a wonderful way to leave.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-06-03 09:41 PM

well done Dixie

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-06-04 01:59 AM

love...love human's vitamin.

good.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2007-07-03 10:37 AM

if it kills me, I'll smile
and say "life was really good"

just because you loved me

Some loves are that defining... even when the losing feels like it surely must kill you... you still feel lucky to have once lived.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2007-07-03 10:44 AM

good to read you, miss you dixie, hope life is good to you, It is finally being good to me.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2007-07-03 12:01 PM

Some loves are like that...
forever kind of love.

Hugs to you Dixie gal~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2007-07-03 11:00 PM

That's a good Love m'friend! Cherish that!

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

10 posted 2007-07-04 12:45 PM

Love is a wonderful thing my friend, to die having loved was a life worth the test. Enjoy the good and the bad is outweiged, love we seek of love we speak. Enjoyed Dixie, thanks for sharing, till again.

Rick

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

11 posted 2007-07-05 01:20 AM

I like this and I think you have some style.

A

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

12 posted 2007-07-05 06:55 AM

There may be few words in this poem Dixie, but I enjoyed the powerful impact they portrayed. Nicely penned.

Best wishes,
/Kit

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

13 posted 2007-07-05 07:43 PM

just because I was passing

a poet who cares

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