Steve's sidewalk poem (Nan's challenge)

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Open Poetry #40

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2007-05-31 11:14 PM

poem on the sidewalk
succulent fronds in the sun
shade for the man’s words

[This message has been edited by The Lady (06-01-2007 10:49 PM).]

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-31 11:19 PM

wow wow wow, beautiful, lovely.

good one, lady.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-05-31 11:20 PM

Both are beautiful.
Enjoy your work so much.

A

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-06-01 12:55 PM

thank you Drauntz
I appreciate your reply

Alison
thank you

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-06-01 09:52 AM

You came through that one with flying colors. I like the way you use the picture of the sidewalk poem to set your scene.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2007-06-01 01:53 PM

Milady Kate...
Incredibly creative... remarkably unique
     thoroughly thoughtful... outside the box.

             MoonShadow
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-06-01 10:54 PM

thank you Nan
for the reply and the challenge

thank you Kenneth
for your kind words

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