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Nan's no verb challenge--The Bird
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Nan's no verb challenge--The Bird |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
The bird A young Rainbow With beautiful feathers Of colorful light from the prism Cheerful as Lorrikeet on the soft branch Of old willow by the stream Between blues, within greens Gouldian Finches The bird |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Impressive. Good that I got to this one quickly and got away with a mere haiku! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetBao~ You charm with words ... A young Rainbow With beautiful feathers Of colorful light from the prism Cheerful as Lorrikeet on the soft branch Of old willow by the stream Between blues, within greens Gouldian Finches The bird' How pretty this form looks on you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, excellent form, and such a lovely picture! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely image and good write. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a beautiful bird Drauntz well done |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
What a beautiful descriptive write, I loved it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done!  |
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