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Tomer
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0 posted 2007-05-31 04:37 PM



Sometimes we remember things,
Little things,
Things that escaped our eyes
But sat still in our pockets.

A laugh,
A smell,
Maybe even a song.
Memories that withered storms,
Fought heartbreak,
Endured tragedy,
Just so they could
Have the privelage
Of walking with our
Shadows presence.

We remember
What we dream,
But what if our dreams
Are merely a window
Into a territory
That is secluded by only
Those that can design
Their own good fortune.

Are we to believe that
This is all that dreams
And memories are about?

Memories don’t subside
They merely ride along with us
Until our dreams become present
With our shadows presence.

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1 posted 2007-05-31 04:49 PM


Tomer~

'Sometimes we remember things,
Little things,
Things that escaped our eyes
But sat still in our pockets.'


Oh yes ... those memories come from the darndest of places ... taking the time, making the time to recall them is something I am playing catch-up on today~

Lovely penning~

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~*Marge*~

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-31 05:02 PM


"We remember
What we dream,
But what if our dreams
Are merely a window
Into a territory
That is secluded by only
Those that can design
Their own good fortune." it is a very sad way to talk about a dream.

a very beautiful poem and it makes me think more.

enjoyed.

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