Open Poetry #40 |
the way things are |
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
conflicting opinions ignorant sincerity why can't you be you and just let me be me? not sure what is real now or what I'm supossed to do as I fade into black and out of the blue unable to trust so don't turn around to look at me the door shut behind her why didn't you shut it for me? don't bother even to pretend that you care don't worry about what I'm doing here just remember I'm no longer your golden hair surprise although still green I am wise you never knew me was never there no longer in the dark free from you at last through these gates you'll never pass ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Fly high and free, little birdie! Loving Light, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
know exactly the sincerity in this... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you for your replies....mostly about letting go of negativity...to find where you stand ultimately.....take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
JulieAnn... well done Miss! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this one...I can relate |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you both....I keep reading it....there is something I don't like about it but can't put my finger on it...Take care....JA ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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