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A True Love |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
A True Love I cradled a book And opened its cover The words enfolded me Like the arms of a lover The story blanketed me And I felt infatuation With the turn of every page Turn to adoration … Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (05-28-2007 05:21 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza A lovely write. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you Your words warm me on a cool day. Alison |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, I loved this and enjoyed the rhyme very much. Nicely done!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, Gentle Spirit -- perhaps you are simply a kindred spirit when it comes to books? A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful Aziza I know this feeling... so well |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
superb 'write' [particularly for all us 'bibliophiles'!] much applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lady You have been an inspiration to me since I came to PiP. Thank you for all the words in response to my writing. You never fail to make me smile. Alison ------------------- secondhandpoet - I have to agree with what I read today about you - you are far from "second hand" in your poetry. Thank you for taking the time to read and offer your thoughts. Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and lovely one. enjoyed |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, Drauntz, for reading and enjoying. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alison, I used to read books when I was a child...I had boxes and boxes of them...I could never get enough books I do miss that love in my life but it seems my eyes have gotten a bit old and cranky and after college, I just lost patience. I just might find a good book now and try it again, thanks to your poem here  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, Dixie. I hope that you lose yourelf in a good book and your eyes surprise you by cooperating. xoxoxo Alison |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Brilliant write! Great talent... ~ARH |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, ARH. I love that you took time to comment after your read to let me know your thoughts. A |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I am certainly a kindred spirit when it comes to books. One of the poems I never got around to finishing began: When daylight falls and nighttime calls The weary day to end I settle in my study and Surround myself with friends. Books are my greatest friends and authors my heroes. I see you may feel the same way..  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know, I think you should finish that poem. I am really enjoying reading your creations -- and yes, I am in love with books. Thank you for reading and responding ~ means a lot to me. A |
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