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Open Poetry #40

Another Bird

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-26 01:16 PM

A bird
On the chimney
Smokes the scent of breakfast
In the winter morning’s icy rain
He slowly pulled out his precious quill
Dipping in the misty wet air
On sheet of messy green
“May I come in?”
A bird.”

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2007-05-26 05:21 PM

there are times when even a bird needs a
little comfort...and a bit to eat on a cold
and wintry day. I thought this was a very
cute poem...thank you....

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2007-05-27 07:58 AM

Ohhh! I love this one even more. I know what your answer to the bird was, of course.

- Owl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-28 07:58 AM

Nice writing...I was eating lunch in a restaurant at the Kahala Mall this afternoon and two birds did come in...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-05-28 10:00 PM

"A bird
On the chimney
Smokes the scent of breakfast"

delightful poem Drauntz

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2007-05-28 10:05 PM

What a joy it is to watch the birds in springtime! They do seem to be making a statement. Lovely poem!

Rae

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