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Juno Lake |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A picnic for two Beneath the summer leaves There’s wine and cheese Whose names We’ve just begun to learn Fresh rye bread From a bakery just down the road All the sparrows Seem to have gotten the word There’s nothing for her He wouldn’t do Sharing the food With such persistent Little tattletales If only They’ll keep that secret To themselves . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a little poem of great romance. how lovely the picture is. those little sparrows add lots of laughters in life. you always have a way to say everything in a very calm tune. enjoyed and enjoyed truly a lovely poem |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
enjoyed  you can feel my ANGER you can feel my pain you can see my TORMENT driving me insane |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can picture this John... and can remember such a time in my life~~ M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So peaceful -- but I think those tattling birds live in my yard too. Thank you for the lovely poem. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think it's way past time for a scene like this in my life |
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