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Adam and Eve
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Adam and Eve |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Ma! Ma! Take look I get Rabbit, pheasant, a deer, Cradleboards and doll for my sister A basket for my grandma and for dad I got three heads treaded with knife “Let's pray to bless their soul If not their life” Ma? Ma? Thought when reading Marge’s poem Heads...Lacrosse heads [This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-25-2007 05:26 PM).] |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Wow Drauntz! This might be the best poem of yours I've ever read. Nicely done. Kudos - Ed “Suddenly a giant Cabbage Patch Doll jumps out from behind the shower curtain and grabs him violently.” |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Grim, I was mocking at the ones who left hand held cross but right hand was killing with a sword. |
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