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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-25 01:31 PM


Ma! Ma!
Take look I get
Rabbit, pheasant, a deer,
Cradleboards and doll for my sister
A basket for my grandma and for dad
I got three heads treaded with knife
“Let's pray to bless their soul
If not their life”
Ma? Ma?


Thought when reading Marge’s poem

Heads...Lacrosse heads

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-25-2007 05:26 PM).]

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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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Greenville, South Carolina
1 posted 2007-05-25 06:54 PM


Wow Drauntz! This might be the best poem of yours I've ever read. Nicely done. Kudos   - Ed

“Suddenly a giant Cabbage Patch Doll jumps out from behind the shower curtain and grabs him violently.”

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-25 07:21 PM


Grim, I was mocking at the ones who left hand held  cross but right hand was killing with a  sword.


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