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All Change |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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All Change I do not deal with change to well I’m caught in the past and its spell If I go back in real to view The past is gone there’s only new It is the mortar of my dreams That builds my fantasies in reams It is a world unto itself Full of treasure full of wealth You can’t go back the past is gone In dream it is a full grown swan And here I play the prince of nod Its here I’m king a demigod I am the enzyme of this time And sip this tea with touch of lime I share it with reality A life that’s half of fantasy And in the essence of this tea I loose the chains that cover me |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I LOVE this 'write' (particularly as a most avid 'tea connoisseur'!) sustained applause!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet I appreciate your kind reply, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I have missed your smiles and your poetic ways  My spirit will rise |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh, I really like this. I don't like change either. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well there you are sleep in or something? your allowed I guess?  It is the mortar of my dreams That builds my fantasies in reams It is a world unto itself Full of treasure full of wealth oh boy, yes indeed it is...happy tune this morning, has me whistling like a little girl enjoyed this... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am the enzyme of this time And sip this tea with touch of lime I share it with reality A life that’s half of fantasy And in the essence of this tea I loose the chains that cover me" Care to share a cup with me dear Sy? A most wonder-filled write today.  &  , Nancy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you and its so nice to see you here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you for the sweet reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And a very pretty little girl.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Any time dear. |
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JaySea Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 23Salina, KS - USA |
Tea washes away a lot of my troubles.... both past and changing.... Thank you for your words... Must run, it's tea time! ~~.~~ JaySea You are your own greatest resource.... use all that can be revealed through YOU. JaySea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JaySea Thank you for the stop by. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
S1. new S2. dreams of fantasies, treasure and wealth. S3. still dream full grown swan, prince and king S4. Enzyme of this time...digest and consume time in tea of lime with reality and half of fantasy End. tea? are you sure it is tea but not some thing with proof? I loose the chains that cover me...sir, swan is caught by net not by chains. better stop drinking tea than struggle within the love net.do not change, sir! LOL a beautiful poem again May you have a wonderful weekend and a great Momerial Day, Sir Tabin! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
nice write, i enjoyed it you can feel my ANGER you can feel my pain you can see my TORMENT driving me insane |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Enjoyed the analysis. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowflake, Your comment melts me. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And here I play the prince of nod Its here I’m king a demigod" well and truly said Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you my dear. |
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