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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-05-25 09:01 AM


All Change

I do not deal with change to well
I’m caught in the past and its spell
If I go back in real to view
The past is gone there’s only new

It is the mortar of my dreams
That builds my fantasies in reams
It is a world unto itself
Full of treasure full of wealth

You can’t go back the past is gone
In dream it is a full grown swan
And here I play the prince of nod
Its here I’m king a demigod

I am the enzyme of this time
And sip this tea with touch of lime
I share it with reality
A life that’s half of fantasy

And in the essence of this tea
I loose the chains that cover me


© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-05-25 09:37 AM


I LOVE this 'write' (particularly as a
most avid 'tea connoisseur'!)

sustained applause!!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-05-25 09:44 AM


secondhanddreampoet
I appreciate your kind reply, thank you.

MGROVES
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3 posted 2007-05-25 11:17 AM


I have missed your smiles and your poetic
ways   

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-05-25 11:55 AM


Oh, I really like this. I don't like change either.
LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-05-25 12:22 PM


well there you are

sleep in or something?

your allowed
I guess?  

It is the mortar of my dreams
That builds my fantasies in reams
It is a world unto itself
Full of treasure full of wealth

oh boy, yes indeed it is...happy tune this morning, has me whistling like a little girl

enjoyed this...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2007-05-25 12:32 PM


"I am the enzyme of this time
And sip this tea with touch of lime
I share it with reality
A life that’s half of fantasy

And in the essence of this tea
I loose the chains that cover me"

Care to share a cup with me dear Sy?
A most wonder-filled write today.
& , Nancy

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2007-05-25 12:58 PM


MGROVES
Thank you and its so nice to see you here.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-05-25 12:59 PM


SmartChick
Thank you for the sweet reply.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2007-05-25 01:01 PM


LeeJ
And a very pretty little girl.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-05-25 01:02 PM


Nancy,
Any time dear.

JaySea
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11 posted 2007-05-25 01:06 PM


Tea washes away a lot of my troubles.... both past and changing....

Thank you for your words...
Must run, it's tea time!


~~.~~
JaySea

You are your own greatest resource.... use all that can be revealed through YOU.   JaySea

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-05-25 02:04 PM


JaySea
Thank you for the stop by.

Drauntz
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13 posted 2007-05-25 06:38 PM


S1. new

S2. dreams of fantasies, treasure and wealth.

S3. still dream full grown swan, prince and king  

S4. Enzyme of this time...digest and consume time in tea of lime with reality  and half of fantasy

End. tea? are you sure it is tea but not some thing with proof?

I loose the chains that cover me...sir, swan is caught by net not by chains. better stop drinking tea than struggle within the love net.do not change, sir!   LOL


a beautiful poem again

May you have a wonderful weekend and a great Momerial Day, Sir Tabin!

Snowflake From Hell
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14 posted 2007-05-25 06:56 PM


nice write, i enjoyed it

you can feel my ANGER you can feel my pain you can see my TORMENT driving me insane

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2007-05-25 09:03 PM


Drauntz
Enjoyed the analysis.

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-05-25 09:04 PM


Snowflake,
Your comment melts me.

The Lady
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17 posted 2007-05-27 12:40 PM




"And here I play the prince of nod
Its here I’m king a demigod"

well and truly said Sir Sy


Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2007-05-27 09:55 AM


Lady
Thank you my dear.

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